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Hey Tim! Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. I was actually just in Las Vegas (luckily not in the Bellagio with a redhead) . But I did read your script. It's good.
So, like I said, I'm not sci-fi and fantasy fan, but I like the way the plot is going.
I like the way that everything so far circles back to the attack, the Day of 26,000, and I think that's a good plot device to link together the past, present and even using that as a way to prepare/look toward the future.
Ok, those were just some of my thoughts. Best of luck!~Kimberly