Del from D.O.E.

D.O.E. Book 3
D.O.E. Book 3
Fellow Nerd


I like the start of the story and legends about the stones coming from cracked pieces of heaven during the holy war I would like to hear more about how they came into Evil's hands. The start of the story was very strong, the one thought, one man and your comparisions btwn the greats like ghandi but as the story got into the characters of Prophet and his crew it gets convoluted,(CONFUSING) are we still in the arena and games? I can see a lot of your PT expertise in this since you mention the distances, weight and height of everyone as it comes into play and your avid reading you've done, it's a great start and if you had illustrations it would be cosmic.



Anna,